proof ash is not a mary-sue

a ton of people say ash is a mary-sue (and you know who you are) but here is proof

[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[x] This happens to be red
[x] Their eyes change color
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They have wings
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga (just the outfit)
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Subtotal: 4

Relations

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[x] They have an evil nemesis
[] Who is their sibling
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parents' deaths
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[]
So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or
bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[x] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 7

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[x] They are possessed by a demon     
[] But they struggle to be good anyway
[x] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
total: 9

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[x] They have a special ability/power
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts  
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc give them a nervous breakdown
total: 12

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[x] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[x] They are very mysterious/dark (at times)
[x] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
Subtotal:  17

Miscellaneous

[x] They are physically strong
[]
They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I
would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend'
'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate
to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these
beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to
others, then we have a problem. ((Uh?))
[] They have a rare/unusual name ((What does that have to do with being a marysue?!))
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[x] They are connected with a certain element (her father is an electric dragon)
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[x] They are from a different country to where they live (dragon realms)
[] They are from a long line of ----
[] They have amnesia ((WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!? XD))
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[x] They are 'the chosen one'  
Subtotal: 21

Total: 21


Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others ((TRUE!!!!!! XD))
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction:


Final Total: 21

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your
character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend,
but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice
them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored
around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and
interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category
may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26> -Mary-Sue ((FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-))




see ok she maybe on the borderline but she's not a mary-sue