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a ton of people say ash is a mary-sue (and you know who you are) but here is proof

[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[x] This happens to be red
[x] Their eyes change color
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They have wings
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga (just the outfit)
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Subtotal: 4

Relations

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[x] They have an evil nemesis
[] Who is their sibling
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parents' deaths
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[]
So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or
bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[x] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 7

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[x] They are possessed by a demon     
[] But they struggle to be good anyway
[x] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
total: 9

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[x] They have a special ability/power
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts  
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc give them a nervous breakdown
total: 12

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[x] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[x] They are very mysterious/dark (at times)
[x] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
Subtotal:  17

Miscellaneous

[x] They are physically strong
[]
They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I
would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend'
'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate
to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these
beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to
others, then we have a problem. ((Uh?))
[] They have a rare/unusual name ((What does that have to do with being a marysue?!))
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[x] They are connected with a certain element (her father is an electric dragon)
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[x] They are from a different country to where they live (dragon realms)
[] They are from a long line of ----
[] They have amnesia ((WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!? XD))
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[x] They are 'the chosen one'  
Subtotal: 21

Total: 21


Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others ((TRUE!!!!!! XD))
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction:


Final Total: 21

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your
character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend,
but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice
them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored
around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and
interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category
may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26> -Mary-Sue ((FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-))




see ok she maybe on the borderline but she's not a mary-sue
  • Mood: Eager
  • Listening to: pikachu (i choose you)
  • Reading: max ride
  • Watching: nothing
  • Playing: fossil fighters 2
  • Eating: starbursts
  • Drinking: pop
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DetrimentalNostalgia Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(My main OC Misty is on borderline, too.. But shes not a marysue, she's gotten hurt several times by the experiments she's done. She's an Irken whom is possibly slightly insane, and does experiments on the humans she captures. She often gets injured by the chemicals and tools, even by the spazzy humans, sometimes. marysues are flawless, and Misty has flaws ._.. But I KNOW a marysue. She? It. Yes. It. It's filthy : :iconmrsinvaderzim: ._..... She probably stares at her fail pictures going: :iconcomputernosebleedplz:
... Psh. -O-)
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Ask-Tith Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Close enough.

Mine was a Marysue. lol, I need to change her. XD
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pikafang Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Ash's greatest weakness is................... Her friends by that I mean if an enemy threatens to harm her friends she will give up immediately
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Ask-Tith Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
I know. Meaning she can't die or get hurt.
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pikafang Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
She has died and got hurt just look at the battle is won picture
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